Comments on: What is Wrong? http://azuka.zatechcorp.com/2006/08/15/what-is-wrong/ diary of a coder Mon, 16 Jan 2012 11:34:42 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Azuka Okuleye http://azuka.zatechcorp.com/2006/08/15/what-is-wrong/comment-page-1/#comment-1548 Azuka Okuleye Sun, 27 Aug 2006 02:07:47 +0000 http://azuka.zatechcorp.com/2006/08/15/what-is-wrong/#comment-1548 Thanks Dr Najjar. The 'indicated' portion didn't sound very right to me but I couldn't find what to replace it with. I think I'll use something like 'motioned.' Thanks Dr Najjar. The ‘indicated’ portion didn’t sound very right to me but I couldn’t find what to replace it with. I think I’ll use something like ‘motioned.’

]]> By: Nada Najjar http://azuka.zatechcorp.com/2006/08/15/what-is-wrong/comment-page-1/#comment-1547 Nada Najjar Sun, 27 Aug 2006 02:00:28 +0000 http://azuka.zatechcorp.com/2006/08/15/what-is-wrong/#comment-1547 Wonderfully suspenseful and arouses reader's curiosity. How does it relate to the excerpt you sent out in June in which Ramat escapes the Ijaw locals? Nice, realistic dialogue and nice description. i.e. "Coker joined him at the window. Together, they looked down at the street below. It was raining and many of the gutters were filled. Cars sped in both directions splashing water on the cursing pedestrians waiting to cross the street from either side. A madman dodged between the flying cars, a tattered hole-ridden umbrella over his head."One little comment I hope you will accept: I haven’t seen the verb “indicate” followed by a noun before. I would say “pointed to”. Nada Wonderfully suspenseful and arouses reader’s curiosity. How does it relate to the excerpt you sent out in June in which Ramat escapes the Ijaw locals?
Nice, realistic dialogue and nice description. i.e. “Coker joined him at the window. Together, they looked down at the street below. It was raining and many of the gutters were filled. Cars sped in both directions splashing water on the cursing pedestrians waiting to cross the street from either side. A madman dodged between the flying cars, a tattered hole-ridden umbrella over his head.”One little comment I hope you will accept: I haven’t seen the verb “indicate” followed by a noun before. I would say “pointed to”.

Nada

]]> By: Lizzy http://azuka.zatechcorp.com/2006/08/15/what-is-wrong/comment-page-1/#comment-1536 Lizzy Tue, 22 Aug 2006 21:58:20 +0000 http://azuka.zatechcorp.com/2006/08/15/what-is-wrong/#comment-1536 Okay, now i wanna see the rest. I love your writing. Especially how u describe scenes. The way they were looking outside the window and what was going on out there. Good work, and wow Mr. Filatei sure is one man who makes his presence known. And yeah, i wonder why 'slightly blind people' take their glasses away and squeeze their eyes as if they can see better without the glasses. lol, aint dat funny. Okay, now i wanna see the rest.

I love your writing. Especially how u describe scenes. The way they were looking outside the window and what was going on out there.

Good work, and wow Mr. Filatei sure is one man who makes his presence known.

And yeah, i wonder why ‘slightly blind people’ take their glasses away and squeeze their eyes as if they can see better without the glasses. lol, aint dat funny.

]]> By: Azuka Okuleye http://azuka.zatechcorp.com/2006/08/15/what-is-wrong/comment-page-1/#comment-1534 Azuka Okuleye Tue, 22 Aug 2006 14:22:33 +0000 http://azuka.zatechcorp.com/2006/08/15/what-is-wrong/#comment-1534 Hi Julius, I'm sorry your name is <b>Filatei</b>. I got the name from http://www.ijawdictionary.com/menu/ijawnames.php and I loved the triple meaning. For all purposes, I stick to the first meaning although the other ones may be used to make a jibe at him later in my book. This is a work of fiction. It's mostly about the Niger Delta struggle -- Who better to head the good side than an Ijaw [Izon or Ezon] man? Hi Julius,

I’m sorry your name is Filatei. I got the name from http://www.ijawdictionary.com/menu/ijawnames.php and I loved the triple meaning. For all purposes, I stick to the first meaning although the other ones may be used to make a jibe at him later in my book.

This is a work of fiction. It’s mostly about the Niger Delta struggle — Who better to head the good side than an Ijaw [Izon or Ezon] man?

]]> By: julius http://azuka.zatechcorp.com/2006/08/15/what-is-wrong/comment-page-1/#comment-1533 julius Tue, 22 Aug 2006 14:18:14 +0000 http://azuka.zatechcorp.com/2006/08/15/what-is-wrong/#comment-1533 Which 'Filatei' are you refering to in this case? Which ‘Filatei’ are you refering to in this case?

]]> By: Azuka Okuleye http://azuka.zatechcorp.com/2006/08/15/what-is-wrong/comment-page-1/#comment-1529 Azuka Okuleye Thu, 17 Aug 2006 02:43:40 +0000 http://azuka.zatechcorp.com/2006/08/15/what-is-wrong/#comment-1529 Typical male? Interesting. May I ask what your perceptions of the typical male are from you females' point of view? Well, I'm trying to stay as close to reality as possible, which means I have to include male chauvinism :D. Typical male? Interesting. May I ask what your perceptions of the typical male are from you females’ point of view?

Well, I’m trying to stay as close to reality as possible, which means I have to include male chauvinism :D .

]]> By: Leegays http://azuka.zatechcorp.com/2006/08/15/what-is-wrong/comment-page-1/#comment-1528 Leegays Wed, 16 Aug 2006 21:25:29 +0000 http://azuka.zatechcorp.com/2006/08/15/what-is-wrong/#comment-1528 Lol.. GOod write up.. I must admit you do good in writing.. I don't have the patience.. as regards the story, hahahahah 2 words: Abuse of Power The Typical Male...(lol) sorry I had to go there.. Lol.. GOod write up.. I must admit you do good in writing.. I don’t have the patience..
as regards the story, hahahahah 2 words:
Abuse of Power
The Typical Male…(lol) sorry I had to go there..

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